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#1 crol

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Posted 03 May 2008 - 04:53 AM

i was (supposedly) studying in the library and was really bored... so i wrote a poem! as you do. it sounds like a 10 year old wrote it, and sorry about the crack reference, once i thort of it i couldnt leave it out...

She steps out her door
To discover a war
That's all being fought over her
And I pray that she'll think
As she starts to sink
"Things were better the way they were"

But there's no turning back
Since she started on crack
When the world decided to get involved
'Till she calls it a day
Decides she's not okay
The problem will never be solved

While some get offended
By the damage left unmended
We know that's not what she meant
So the war rages on
While we wait for our song
Detailing these horrid events


Hope this brightens up your day! Don't give up on Amy!

#2 suestev07

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Posted 03 May 2008 - 04:54 PM

That a pretty darn good summary. As they say, succinct and to the point.

#3 sarahbol

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Posted 03 May 2008 - 07:05 PM

^ Agree.
Good. :thumbup:




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