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Im new here.. u can find out about who i am and how i got here in the intreduce forum..
Heres something i wrote after Amy passed, i have some more if ud like ill post them too...
I wrot down 2 more in the intreduce thread.


A thousand times ive seen your face,
Could be more, cant be less
And eveytime i felt like i couldnt breathe,
Like every breath ill take, will force you to leave

Everyone is asking you for more,
Youre high in the sky, but still on the floor,
You can have everything you want,
Just not what you need,
You fight all the wars, with no more blood to bleed.

I wish i could take your pain and make it mine,
You shouldn't suffer from what he left behind
Youre surounded by guards and the walls that youve made
How come theres no one who could break?

You try to fool us all with a smile on your face,
But i know that with you its never the case
Touching heaven, but locked in hell
The walls have broken but youre still in a cell.

I wish id never heard your name or knew who you are
That ill go back to the days when the dark rulled,and the light was far
Where my soul was bare and i was by myself only..
Cause back than i was alone, now im just lonely

[Amy Jenna Harper]

Really good..really like it Shai..

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Thanks Ivy..
I have a few more but i dont really know how'd you all feel about them..

[AmyJWinehousefan]

Two words: Completely beautiful.
That's all I have to say.
:-(